final dps

i was also told that my colour scheme through out the whole magazine was inconsistant.
So i chnaged the colour scheme of my DPS which was the only part of the magazine that was different.
I also got different opinions on this page and again everyone agreed it was an improvement

final front cover

i have made dramatic changes to my magazine. i was told my magazine was inconsistant in font so i chnaged the fonts around and also the colour to suit the main imagine and the rest of my magazine front cover. I made i had second, third and forth opinion on my work and they all agreed it was a huge improvement.